B1 PET WRITING SAMPLES Article Offical Cambridge 2020

This series includes 3 parts.
Each writing part, you could find the Overview, Exam tips, Exam practice, Sample answer and a quick Explanation of How to mark.
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p/s: According to a native teacher, there are FIVE grammatical and spelling errors! It also has other expressions that aren’t natural in English! (minute 3:34).
Can you correct them? Please leave a comment as well. Thank you so much !

6 Comments

  1. Thuresh Weerasinghe on June 28, 2022 at 2:51 pm

    Most people adore computer games but some people think that is a horrible waste of time. Me and my minions hate computer games since they are considered unhealthy.
    In my opinion, Video games can be socializing. Moreover, it is stimulating and fun. In addition, if you play adventure games, it will improve your brains capacity and logic. Also video games can make an amusing hobby. However, there is a downside of playing video games. One of the biggest problem is addiction. Lots of teens are facing this issue due to continuous playing of video games .Also, playing video games can reduce your health and you’ll ended up being fat.
    Considering these points, I recommend you to play more outdoor games to lead a healthy life.

  2. Giovani Ribeiro on June 28, 2022 at 2:52 pm

    Teacher. Are you will post reading test too??

  3. Thuresh Weerasinghe on June 28, 2022 at 3:14 pm

    Though many people are not fans of shopping I think it’s a quite exciting and interesting since you can interact with people. Moreover, I can purchase different things too .However, I will fed up with shopping if there is a long queue . Even the most luxury shop won’t attract me if there are a lot of crowd.

    I believe that shopping centers can take in a few people at a time hence there want be a long queue. Furthermore, They can keep various eye catchy items to take customer’s attraction. I also think that they can include a children’s area than the children won’t be bored with staying in a line.
    I personally believe that shopping is a fun and stimulating hobby for anyone to try out. Though many people don’t agree to my point.

  4. Thuresh Weerasinghe on June 28, 2022 at 3:25 pm

    As it says “if you limit the languages you limit the world “I think it’s very important to learn another tongue. Moreover, if you try to be bilingual you can make new friends around the world. Furthermore, other languages can help to get novel experience and learn more about the world.
    In my opinion, it’s great to study foreign tongues in a group since it’s more enjoyable. If you study alone you cannot interact and practice with partners. However, it’s peaceful to learn alone. But I still feel it’s amusing to learn in a group.
    Considering these points, I recommend you to focus on foreign languages instead of learning only one tounge.

    Please check this too. And send me the corrections. Thanks for your great video.

  5. LP on June 28, 2022 at 3:26 pm

    Article, not artiCAL )

  6. PuebloNuevo99 on June 28, 2022 at 3:29 pm

    The advice is good but the sample story – the answer to the article question that you give has FIVE grammatical and spelling errors! It also has other expressions that aren’t natural in English! (minute 3:34). I’m not sure if your answer would pass B1 (I am a B1 Cambridge native English teacher)

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